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=Shivani Patel's Critical Paper=

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January 29 — folder and parent signature due
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January 30 — note cards due
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January 31 — select a topic
View a list of potential paper topics: Choose a topic for your paper and type it here: (5 points)


 * //Catcher is largely autobiographical.//**

Feburary 1 — thesis due
Your thesis tells your readers what point you will be making and defending about the novel. For a guide to writing your thesis (and some examples) click here. __Write your thesis here__: (5 points)

J.D Salinger is a very complicated author. Many things had happened to him during his life. He is the auther of Catcher in the Rye and many other famous book wriiten by him. In the Catcher in the Rye, Salinger makes the book autobiographical im many ways. The three ways that were most noticing to me were that they were both rebels, they hated phonies, and they were hermits.

Your three main body topics are the main topics you will use to defend your thesis. You should use at least three different subtopics (main bodies) to defend your thesis in the paper. Many students use 4, 5, or even more main body topics to organize their papers. THREE IS JUST A MINIMUM.

__Please enter (at least) three main body topics here__: (5 points)

1) 2) 3)

February 6 — introductory paragraph due
Your intro paragrpah tells your readers the thesis of your paper, and briefly outlines the main body paragraph topics you will use to prove and defend your thesis. __Type **(or link to)** your Introductory Paragraph here__: (10 points)

Havelock Ellis once said, “Every artist writes his own autobiography.” J. D. Salinger, the author of the book "The Catcher in the Rye", is also an artist. Instead of painting on a canvas, Salinger writes on on paper. While he writes beautifully on the paper, he is also using real life experiances to show his emotions in his books. In "The Catcher in the Rye' J.D Salinger has not only told a beautiful story about a kid with a whole lot of problems, but he has shared some personal stories through the story of Holden Caufield. J.D Salinger is a very complicated author. Many unusual and horrific events have happened in this author during his life time. The way people find out about the different scars Salinger has is by reading his books because artists always put alittle bit of themselves in their artwork. In his case, Salinger is quite autobiographical in "The Catcher in the Rye." The three most noticing ways that Holden Caufield and J.D Salinger are alike, meaning that "The Catcher in the Rye," is autobiographical, are that they were both rebels or tried to be, they hated phonies which was everyone in their eyes, and they were hermits to society.

February 7 — critical articles (secondary sources) due
You need at least three secondary sources (essays or articles about the novel written by professional critics) from which you will quote the words of the author/critic to help defend your thesis. __List the titles and authors of your three secondary sources here__: (5 points)

1) bio shivani 2) then and now shivani patel 3)flunking anything else except english anyway shivani patel 4) J.D. Salinger Shivani Patel


 * NOTE**: It is a good idea to find more than three articles in case you change your mind about using one of them. Remember, your final paper must have a total of 8-15 quotes from these secondary sources to help you make your point and defend your thesis. These eight quotes must come from at least three different secondary sources.

February 8 — secondary source quotes
Using each of your three articles at least once, select at least 8 details or quotes from your articles to defend thesis. YOU MUST LIST THE QUOTE, THE SOURCE OF THE QUOTE, AND THE MAIN BODY TOPIC OF YOUR PAPER WHERE YOU WILL USE THE QUOTE. __List at least eight quotes from secondary sources here__: (5 points)

1) QUOTE: TITLE & PAGE: AUTHOR: SUBTOPIC:

2) QUOTE: TITLE & PAGE: AUTHOR: SUBTOPIC:

3) QUOTE: TITLE & PAGE: AUTHOR: SUBTOPIC:

4) QUOTE: TITLE & PAGE: AUTHOR: SUBTOPIC:

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8) QUOTE: TITLE & PAGE: AUTHOR: SUBTOPIC:

(Feel free to add additional quotes here, using the same format as above)

February 11 — primary source quotes
Please select at least 10 details from the novel to defend thesis Feb 11 __List them here__: (5 points)

1) QUOTE: PAGE NUMBER: SUBTOPIC:

2) QUOTE: PAGE NUMBER: SUBTOPIC:

3) QUOTE: PAGE NUMBER: SUBTOPIC:

4) QUOTE: PAGE NUMBER: SUBTOPIC:

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(Feel free to add additional quotes here, using the same format as above)

February 12 — outline your main body
Please arrange your 10 primary source quotes and your 8 secondary source quotes into an outline of the body of your critical paper. In other words, list the quotes in the order you will use them under each main body topic.

If you use a word document to do this, this could become the framework for your actual paper (because you could type your own writing in between the quotes after you've arranged them in order in this outline, thus creating a draft of your actual paper).

__Please post **(or link to)** a word document containing the outline of your main body (everything but your intro and conclusion) here:__ (5 points)

February 13 — first draft of main body
Write a draft of the body of your paper for peer review.

Please create a link to this first draft, calling it (YOURNAME)'S FIRST DRAFT, as a __new__ wiki page. Ask __at least three__ of your classmates to __read__ your draft (you might need to tell them where to find it by emailing them a link). Students will be expected to read each other's drafts __and leave comments__ in the discussion board. (10 points)

February 14 — peer review
__List the names of at least three of your classmates whose first drafts you read and commented upon:__ (5 points)

1) Ellen Kuhl 2)Natasha Valour 3) Brittany M

At this point, begin revising your draft and come up with a second rough draft.

February 19 — final rough draft
Submit a paper copy of your final draft of the body to the teacher. (20 points)

February 21 — rough draft of conclusion paragraph
__Please type **(or link to)** the rough draft of your conclusion paragraph here__: (5 points)

February 22 — final draft of conclusion paragraph
Revise your conclusion paragraph and present a copy to your teacher today. __Also, please type **(or link to)** the rough draft of your conclusion paragraph here__: (10 points)

February 25 — Works Cited Page due
Turn in a paper copy of your works cited page to your teacher today! __Link to the Word document of your works cited page here__: (20 points)

Helterman, Jeffery. “J.D. Salinger.” //__ Dictionary of Literary Biography, Volume 2: American Novelists Since World War II, First Series __////__.__//” 1978: pp. 434-444. __Gale__ __Infotrac Literature Resource Center____.__ North Penn High School Library. Lansdale, PA. 31 January 2008 . Lee, A. Robert. ** "Flunking Everything Else Except English Anyway': Holden Caulfield, Author." **__In // Critical Essays on Salinger's // The Catcher in the Rye__ Teachout, Terry. “Salinger Then and Now.” //__ Commentary __// __Vol. 84, No. 3__ September, 1987: pp. 61-4. __Gale__ __Infotrac Literature Resources Center__. North Penn High School Library. Lansdale, PA. 31 January 2008 http://infotrac.galegroup.com/menu.

February 27 — CRITICAL PAPER DUE!!!
Turn in the final draft of critical paper TODAY, including: a) note cards b) outline of body c) all rough drafts d) completed checklist, signed e) final draft of paper, typed, double spaced (5-7 pgs.) f) final works cited / references page

(100 points)

March 5 — TURN IT IN (dot com)
Today is the final day for MANDATORY submission of your final critical paper to [|www.turnitin.com]


 * __FAILURE TO SUBMIT YOUR PAPER TO TURNITIN.COM WILL RESULT IN A ZERO ON YOUR PAPER!__**

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