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=Patrick Moran's Critical Paper=

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January 29 — folder and parent signature due
Did you show the teacher your two-pocket folder with three-ring center? (5 pts.) NO
 * YES**

Did you show the teacher your Parent Signature? (5 pts.) NO
 * YES**

January 30 — note cards due
Did you show the teacheryour one pack of 3x5 notecards? (5 pts.) NO
 * YES**

Did you buy your own copy of The Catcher in the Rye to mark up? (optional) YES
 * NO**

January 31 — select a topic
View a list of potential paper topics: Choose a topic for your paper and type it here: **"//Catcher// is largely autobiographical."** (5 points)

February 4 — thesis due
Your thesis tells your readers what point you will be making and defending about the novel. For a guide to writing your thesis (and some examples) click here. __Write your thesis here__: **The book //Catcher in the Rye// is largely autobiographical because J.D. Salinger has an interesting life and has both similarities and differences to Holden.** (5 points)

Your three main body topics are the main topics you will use to defend your thesis. You should use at least three different subtopics (main bodies) to defend your thesis in the paper. Many students use 4, 5, or even more main body topics to organize their papers. THREE IS JUST A MINIMUM.

__Please enter (at least) three main body topics here__: (5 points)

1) Bio on Salinger 2) Similarities to Holden 3) Differences to Holden

February 6 — introductory paragraph due
Your intro paragrpah tells your readers the thesis of your paper, and briefly outlines the main body paragraph topics you will use to prove and defend your thesis. __Type **(or link to)** your Introductory Paragraph here__: (10 points)
 * I believe that the book //Catcher in the Rye// is largely autobiographical. I will begin with telling you a bit about J.D. Salinger’s life and some facts about him. I will also be explaining the similarities and differences between Salinger and Holden. I think that he made Holden similar to himself. The book //Catcher in the Rye// is largely autobiographical because J.D. Salinger has an interesting life and has both similarities and differences to Holden.**

February 7 — critical articles (secondary sources) due
You need at least three secondary sources (essays or articles about the novel written by professional critics) from which you will quote the words of the author/critic to help defend your thesis. __List the titles and authors of your three secondary sources here__: (5 points)

1) Bio 2) Bio 2 3) Bio 3


 * NOTE**: It is a good idea to find more than three articles in case you change your mind about using one of them. Remember, your final paper must have a total of 8-15 quotes from these secondary sources to help you make your point and defend your thesis. These eight quotes must come from at least three different secondary sources.

February 8 — secondary source quotes
Using each of your three articles at least once, select at least 8 details or quotes from your articles to defend thesis. YOU MUST LIST THE QUOTE, THE SOURCE OF THE QUOTE, AND THE MAIN BODY TOPIC OF YOUR PAPER WHERE YOU WILL USE THE QUOTE. __List at least eight quotes from secondary sources here__: (5 points)

1) QUOTE: "Born January 1, 1919, in New York, New York" TITLE & PAGE: http://8thperiod.wikispaces.com/Bio AUTHOR: SUBTOPIC:

2) QUOTE: "He was expelled from several private preparatory schools before graduating from Valley Forge Military Academy in 1936." TITLE & PAGE: http://8thperiod.wikispaces.com/Bio+2 AUTHOR: SUBTOPIC:

3) QUOTE: "Salinger's upbringing was not unlike that of Holden Caulfield, the Glass children, and many of his other characters." TITLE & PAGE: http://8thperiod.wikispaces.com/Bio+2 AUTHOR: SUBTOPIC:

4) QUOTE: "Yet despite this limited body of work, Salinger remained for at least a dozen years, from 1951 to 1963, the most popular American fiction writer with serious high-school and college students, as well as many adults alienated by the stultifying conformity of the Eisenhower years; and his few publications elicited an enormous body of criticism." TITLE & PAGE: http://8thperiod.wikispaces.com/Bio+3 AUTHOR: SUBTOPIC:

5) QUOTE: "While //Catcher's// Holden Caulfield rebels against his society, he does not attempt to overturn the established values system. Holden instead insists that those values be restored from the perversion they have suffered under the world of 'phonies.' " TITLE & PAGE: http://8thperiod.wikispaces.com/Bio AUTHOR: SUBTOPIC:

6) QUOTE: "After //The Catcher in the Rye// was published, Salinger found himself at the center of a storm of controversy. His novel was lauded by many, but condemned by others for its language and social criticism." TITLE & PAGE: http://8thperiod.wikispaces.com/Bio+2 AUTHOR: SUBTOPIC:

7) QUOTE: "When it began to find its way onto the recommended reading lists of educational institutions, it became the target of numerous censorship campaigns." TITLE & PAGE: http://8thperiod.wikispaces.com/Bio+2 AUTHOR: SUBTOPIC:

8) QUOTE: "Reportedly, he continues to write, but only for his own satisfaction; he is said to be completely unconcerned with his standing, or lack of it, in the literary world." TITLE & PAGE: http://8thperiod.wikispaces.com/Bio+2 AUTHOR: SUBTOPIC:

(Feel free to add additional quotes here, using the same format as above)

February 11 — primary source quotes
Please select at least 10 details from the novel to defend thesis Feb 11 __List them here__: (5 points)

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(Feel free to add additional quotes here, using the same format as above)

February 12 — outline your main body
Please arrange your 10 primary source quotes and your 8 secondary source quotes into an outline of the body of your critical paper. In other words, list the quotes in the order you will use them under each main body topic.

If you use a word document to do this, this could become the framework for your actual paper (because you could type your own writing in between the quotes after you've arranged them in order in this outline, thus creating a draft of your actual paper).

__Please post **(or link to)** a word document containing the outline of your main body (everything but your intro and conclusion) here:__ (5 points)

February 19 — first draft of main body
Write a draft of the body of your paper for peer review.

Please create a link to this first draft, calling it (YOURNAME)'S FIRST DRAFT, as a __new__ wiki page. Ask __at least three__ of your classmates to __read__ your draft (you might need to tell them where to find it by emailing them a link). Students will be expected to read each other's drafts __and leave comments__ in the discussion board. (10 points)

February 20 — peer review
__List the names of at least three of your classmates whose first drafts you read and commented upon:__ (5 points)

1) 2) 3)

At this point, begin revising your draft and come up with a second rough draft.

February 22 — final rough draft
Submit a paper copy of your final draft of the body to the teacher. (20 points)

February 25 — rough draft of conclusion paragraph
__Please type **(or link to)** the rough draft of your conclusion paragraph here__: (5 points)
 * Salinger has an interesting life and has both similarities and differences to Holden. He has a very interesting life and is a good writer. There are numerous similarities to Holden as well as a lot of differences. J. D. Salinger is an interesting person that is very different then any other writer out there.**

February 26 — final draft of conclusion paragraph
Revise your conclusion paragraph and present a copy to your teacher today. __Also, please type **(or link to)** the rough draft of your conclusion paragraph here__: (10 points)
 * Salinger has an interesting life and has both similarities and differences to Holden. He has a very interesting life and is a good writer. There are numerous similarities to Holden as well as a lot of differences. J. D. Salinger is an interesting person that is very different then any other writer out there.**

February 27 — Works Cited Page due
Turn in a paper copy of your works cited page to your teacher today! __Link to the Word document of your works cited page here__: (20 points)

March 4 — CRITICAL PAPER DUE!!!
Turn in the final draft of critical paper TODAY, including: a) note cards b) outline of body c) all rough drafts d) completed checklist, signed e) final draft of paper, typed, double spaced (5-7 pgs.) f) final works cited / references page

(100 points)

March 8 — TURN IT IN (dot com)
Today is the final day for MANDATORY submission of your final critical paper to [|www.turnitin.com]


 * __FAILURE TO SUBMIT YOUR PAPER TO TURNITIN.COM WILL RESULT IN A ZERO ON YOUR PAPER!__**

=Hooray!! You're done!= =Now let's have some fun making our Julius Caesar movie!=